rupertpiston's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Edible Castle #2]

Funny story, humor, and pictures.

Who would know that such simple pictures can be so funny? I love that you are able to accomplish so much with this. First time I've seen Edible Castle, now I have to go look at your site. Great voices, accent variety, cinemetography. Lots of fun.

EdibleCastle responds:

thanks fella! Feel free to have a look at the other cartoons, especially Cuboy.

[littleFoot]

Great stuff for anyone to enjoy

I love this stuff you get going. The visuals, the range of colors, the way you animate. Absolutely riveting.

[Your Inner Torchic]

good graphics, light on animation, unclear story

In all fairness I should preface this by saying I'm not a big fan of Anime, and I may be mistaken in thinking this is attempting something like it.

In the first two shots I found myself waiting for something to happen and the only action was a repetitive motion by one of the characters. I'm guilty myself of underanimating things, but when this happens, try to change the shot more often to give us some pacing.

Keep working, you're heading in the right direction.

[*Inside*]

Good film needs a preloader

There's a meditative sort of quality to this piece that I really like. Good graphics, and good sounds that help tell the story.

However, the constant replay of the shots drives me sorta batty. A preloader would help us enjoy thi much better without getting distracted and bored by the replays.

Very artistic, however.